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topic posted Tue, April 21, 2009 - 10:21 AM by  Unsubscribed
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I would love some input on my youtube clip and my website overall actually...

www.melodidance.com

The video is on the gallery page at the bottom. I hope you like and I am certainly open to ideas and critiques.

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  • Re: feedback

    Tue, April 21, 2009 - 10:55 AM
    Here's one suggestion:

    A resume that includes how long you've been dancing and places that you've danced.

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    Tue, April 21, 2009 - 12:37 PM
    <doing my best Dick Solomon (3rd Rock) impression!> "YOU ARE GORGEOUS!!!!!"
    safe journeys
    michele
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      Tue, April 21, 2009 - 12:57 PM
      Rya, you are right...I just didn't think about my dance resume. I had some of my resume in the introduction on the home page, but it felt very sterile so I changed it. Good suggestion, thank you.

      Michele,
      Thanks for the compliment and the nice afternoon giggle that I very much needed.

      Keep the feedback coming...thanks
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        Tue, April 21, 2009 - 6:49 PM
        Sorry about the short post! I was in a hurry.

        The resume was my most hated part of my website and I still don't like it. I think mine basically reads like a text book. lol Most people will go straight to that...and your gallery.

        I love your pictures!
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    Mon, April 27, 2009 - 7:36 PM
    Overall I liked your site.

    I do have a few things about your YouTube video though:

    ~The first thing was at the very beginning, it was distracting that your veil was a blue print and your costume was purple.
    ~ It was also distracting me that it kept changing from the purple costume to the green one...I mean, I understood the reason behind it but it was distracting to me.
    ~ I could see people walking in the hall trough the window behind you.
    ~ At one point, when you were in the green costume, there was something that looked like part of your costume (a headband or arm band or something) in the floor beside you.

    I have had the pleasure of seeing you dance in person several times and you are a beautiful dancer! And I have the attention span of a gnat, if that is not obvious. I just think maybe you should use one of your performances from Kismet or something for the YouTube portion of your website.
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      Tue, April 28, 2009 - 8:09 AM
      Thanks Renee.

      I agree with your assesments and I will be performing at this choreo at next Kismet and using that video instead, but I needed something so I took advantage of a friend and rented studio space.

      You are correct, there was a dance class letting out during my filming and yes, my anklet came off. Unfortunate yes, but hopefully at Kismet all will go better and the video will be free from these distractions. So, check back to see the full version on my website at the end of May or beginning of June.
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        Tue, April 28, 2009 - 7:15 PM
        Cool! Hopefully I will get to see it in person! I love getting to see you perform!!!!!

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